Draft 1 Feedback

  • not great quality – need to fix this. We believe this is happenings we have done our first rough cut on movie make which does not show the good quality of film taken. We are now in a search for a new editing software.
  • Need to add certain elements of non-diegetic sound to when the actors are speaking; depending on the type of scene i.e. sad, action, thriller. The type of non-diegetic we would pick would fit into the film trailer.
  • Need to add certain diegetic elements of sounds to the trailer; for instance peoples foot steps, upbeat music in the party scene.
  • Certain cuts in the film footage are quiet long and in a crime/drama film this is not stereotypically the case. Usually shot cuts are very quick.