Draft 2 Feedback

  • The titles and credits are good at the start to make it look like more of a real film trailer.
  • “I’ve got  a job for you” – non-diegetic sound over another scene that when it was actually filmed in.
  • Blending into the scene with the sentence finishing.
  • Gloomey colouring of certain shots to make the scene dark and suspicious.
  • Voice talking over scenes in the trailer.
  • Begins to go onto the full story
  • Certain scenes need to be sorted out as there are a few technical glitches.
  • Use of the Hong Kong scenes to make the trailer look like a more crime/drama film which stereotypically have tropical exotic settings.
  • Non- diegetic music needs to be put into he background.
  • Jump shots of different scenes are very effective in the trailer and especially near the end when there is the most tension.