Draft 3 Feedback

• perhaps put the montage sequence of past events in black and white to show the audience that it is in black and white
• fade music in the park scene so that the audience don’t just feel that they have suddenly jumped shots
• have a black boarder round the outside of the screen so will need to remove this
• effect on cam when walking through the room needs to be retendered as the slow motion is very jumpy
• have some ambient sounds in the background to show that they are outside and it’s not just them talking and that is all that the audience can hear
• trailer should be at least 2 minutes long – so need to make it longer
• 180 degree rule – need to retake footage of cam walking in room as this should not happen