From the feedback I had received on my 4th draft; it wa suggested by my target audience that I should make my audience feel more exclusive so I added a few snapshots of the film on the front of the magazine. This was a snippet of what the film is about but its also to tell the audience that there’s more inside and more exclusivity inside the magazine where you will get in no other magazine. I also added another tag as was suggested by the target audience group. This tag talks about James Bond. This show the audience the type of film ‘Love is Lethal’ is about. A crime/drama film; that is just as good as James Bond.
A suggestion for next time made by my target audience is to
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